Enchanted by the bitter
harmony of your lips,
I gazed beyond reason
to find
the
oasis
of
your
ruptured
soul...
harmony of your lips,
I gazed beyond reason
to find
the
oasis
of
your
ruptured
soul...
posted by Jona at 1:54 PM
posted by Jona at 1:54 PM
5 Comments:
confused by the
weird structure
of
your poem
i am
lead
to think
of the ones
in
private
eye
I've had an idea:
We should all try to write poems that start with the words "enchanted by the bitter"
what's to be confused about?
so
many
lines
so few
words
makes
it
very
vertical
why is vertical better than horizontal. the chinese dig it.
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